Monday, 3 December 2012

Incomplete
I have the basis of my magazine but using the audience feedback I will need huge improvements
contents page Incomplete problems with up loading

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  2. Good image on the front cover but your masthead needs to stand out more
    and i dont think your colour scheme goes very well together maybe try and look on google at existing front covers and use some of there color schemes

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  3. The front cover looks pretty good add more coverlines and add the date and issue number to make it look more professional.

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  4. The photo that you have used works well with the genre and I like how you have used a black colourama as this reflects the genre.

    I also like the masthead; the glow makes it seem as though it is worth a lot of money and therefore relates to the genre.

    However, the coverlines are in a bubble effect which makes it seem as though it is directed at a younger audience.

    Also, the barcode is too big and you should include the date and price.

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  5. The picture is really good, i like the way that the person in blues face fades unto the background.

    i like the coverlines that are in bubble wrighting all though that could of been for the main article and the rest in a different font. there could also be more coverlines.

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